09 December 2011

so much for a poem.

take my hand and come with me
to a place we both have never been
where i heard the grass is green
the air is free
the water's fresh 
and full with fish

don't you want to tag along
and go to a place where we both belong
together forever and all those ding-dongs
where we'll sing love songs all night long

this poem may be rubbish to people
but it's the best one i can think of
the structure's not there
the rhymes doesn't fair
i am not a writer
just another dreamer, caught in reality's lair

so forgive me if this poem is nothing
compared to Shakespeare, Po and Kipling's
but what i can do
is write what i feel
this poem best describes how i feel
tired, stressed, loved, and complicated
and whatever it is in between

oh! wait. 
i thought this poem's about going
going to places where 
where? what?
where dreams exist and reality doesn't
oh wait.
i already am at the place.
it's all in my head.
all these while, all along, in that tiny space.



p.s: this is how i feel right now : crazy.

4 comments:

  1. still loving ur poems! :D

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  2. writer wannabe and Yong: thank you for reading :)

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  3. ah don't mind bout the structure and all. it's a good one ;)

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